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		<title>Comment on Post Revision Exercise by Anne</title>
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		<dc:creator>Anne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Nov 2011 03:26:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, you should let a story rest before tackling revisions!! Otherwise, it&#039;s easy to miss things in your head not on the page (plus all the little things like missing words and typos).  This is how I handle the yay-books-finished phase...because there&#039;s always room for improvement :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, you should let a story rest before tackling revisions!! Otherwise, it&#8217;s easy to miss things in your head not on the page (plus all the little things like missing words and typos).  This is how I handle the yay-books-finished phase&#8230;because there&#8217;s always room for improvement <img src='http://www.annehale.com/wordpress/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Post Revision Exercise by Mirka Breen</title>
		<link>http://www.annehale.com/2011/11/post-revision-exercise/comment-page-1/#comment-135</link>
		<dc:creator>Mirka Breen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Nov 2011 01:34:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The single most important thing I do after each mull-over/revision is to not look at it for a bit. Now if this were practical for posting comments, maybe they would be polished too.  :)</description>
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